I’m just trying to imagine how this conversation even went down. My guy, the story is FOUR YEARS OLD and something she wrote for the hell of it, why are you coming at her about the accuracy of trains? Not just because of the invasion of her privacy, but because he’s picking at her story like she’s asking for legitimate feedback. Needless to say, his girlfriend got upset. LTWwzwyzyQ- Angel loves Moon Knight April 19, 2022 You’re TA for that ALONE, but then you decided to really just put your foot in your mouth and tell her you’d not only read it, but CORRECT HER! Not to mention, she let you borrow her computer and you decided read something you had NO BUSINESS READING. Because it’s not the story itself he has an issue with, it’s the representation of … trains. “I am a train enthusiast and know a lot about the history of rail transportation in the United States,” is not the sentence I expected to read when going through a post about a guy reading his girlfriend’s old work, yet here we are. If you say it’s erotic I want to be blushing by chapter 3 & it better be FILTH.- Je suis Fatty-Gay ApDid she ask you to critique her writing from high school? Nothing upsets me more than a book being labeled erotic but it not having sex through out. Instead of leaving well enough alone, he decides to … critique her old story?!Īlso I’m upset that OP called it erotic writing but then said it only had sex in the end. It’s too late now, though, and he’s gone ahead to read her high school romantic work of fiction. Even if it was, like, a school paper and not something she wrote for fun, he should’ve asked before reading it. We find out that this is a personal story she wrote-as to be expected when it’s a, quote, “erotic” piece written by a teenager (unless you’re reckless like me and passing around your smutty DBZ fanfic in class for the other students to read).